Have written almost ten more pages and now I feel I can extend the story and build on it. At least it is my own approach and will hopefully lead to a conclusion. I really want to have a type of revelatory ending. Something that is a classic. Revelations was always my most loved Biblical story. I wouldn’t mind putting a bit of that in the ending in a different way. Something where the disparate characters find themselves in an even crazier place than they had imagined. Almost like a lucid dream bad acid trip where they are simply rats going through the motions in a laboratory. I will have to think about it and read Revelations again.
Revelations 2
17 He that hath an ear, let him hear what the Spirit saith unto the churches; To him that overcometh will I give to eat of the hidden manna, and will give him a white stone, and in the stone a new name written, which no man knoweth saving he that receiveth it.
27 And he shall rule them with a rod of iron; as the vessels of a potter shall they be broken to shivers: even as I received of my Father.
Revelations 3
3 Remember therefore how thou hast received and heard, and hold fast, and repent. If therefore thou shalt not watch, I will come on thee as a thief, and thou shalt not know what hour I will come upon thee.
5 He that overcometh, the same shall be clothed in white raiment; and I will not blot out his name out of the book of life, but I will confess his name before my Father, and before his angels.
12 Him that overcometh will I make a pillar in the temple of my God, and he shall go no more out: and I will write upon him the name of my God, and the name of the city of my God, which is new Jerusalem, which cometh down out of heaven from my God: and I will write upon him my new name.